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Further Thoughts on Revision or: How I Learned to Stop Worrying and Love the “Beast Christ”

by Nate Brown | January 15, 2020

Further Thoughts on Revision or: How I Learned to Stop Worrying and Love the “Beast Christ”

In 2018, I published an essay that collected some of my thoughts about what writers should think about prior to submitting their work to literary journals. That piece was based on a talk I'd given that year at the Muse and the Marketplace conference in Boston. I returned to the Muse in the spring of 2019 and delivered a sequel to that talk, one in which I was able to include a few more thoughts (and expand upon previous ones) on revision. That initial essay was long, maybe too long, but I felt … [Read more...] about Further Thoughts on Revision or: How I Learned to Stop Worrying and Love the “Beast Christ”

Filed Under: NOTEBOOK Tagged With: art, Ecce Homo, Ecce Mono, memes, revision, Spain, thoughts on revision, writing

Editorial Outtake: If You Leave Me

by Crystal Hana Kim | November 8, 2018

Editorial Outtake: If You Leave Me

Editorial Outtakes is a series in which we publish excerpts from recent books that you won’t find anywhere else because, prior the publication, these sections were cut. This installment of Editorial Outtakes features an original chapter from Crystal Hana Kim's debut novel If You Leave Me. A moving story of love during wartime, the novel's poses difficult questions about whether it's better to choose security over love and safety over freedom. Here, Kim shares her thoughts—and an example of a … [Read more...] about Editorial Outtake: If You Leave Me

Filed Under: EDITORIAL OUTTAKES, NOTEBOOK, NOTEBOOK FEATURE Tagged With: Crystal Hana Kim, Editorial Outtake, Fiction, If You Leave Me, Korea, Love, Novel, revision, romance, War

Editorial Outtakes: Carmiel Banasky

by Carmiel Banasky | October 27, 2015

Editorial Outtakes: Carmiel Banasky

Editorial Outtakes is a feature in which we publish excerpts from novels and story collections that you won’t find in the finished books because, prior to publication, these sections were cut. This installment of Editorial Outtakes features Carmiel Banasky, whose prologue to her debut novel The Suicide of Claire Bishop was cut from the manuscript at the proverbial last minute. Here's the disappeared prologue, followed by Banasky's commentary on the process of writing (and then cutting) this part … [Read more...] about Editorial Outtakes: Carmiel Banasky

Filed Under: EDITORIAL OUTTAKES, NOTEBOOK Tagged With: Carmiel Banasky, Editorial Outtakes, Prologue, revision, The Suicide of Claire Bishop

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Issue 81

Guest-edited by Fernando A. Flores, featuring new stories by Yvette DeChavez, Julián Delgado Lopera, Carribean Fragoza, Alejandro Heredia, Carmen Maria Machado, Ruben Reyes Jr., and Gerardo Sámano Córdova.

You can preview the issue here.

NEWS

Read the winners of the 2024 Insider Prize

Read the winners of the 2024 Insider Prize

By ASF Editors

“Memories are a nuisance,” Peter wrote to one of our writers after reading his short story, “but nonetheless they seem to make us who we are, as this story confirms.” This year’s submissions told many stories burdened with memory, but just as many stared bravely into the face of hope, satirized the state of politics, speculated on the future of the world, or else built entirely new worlds to inhabit. In short, the stories written on the inside reflected the stories we wrote this year on the outside. Stories of human toil and dreams and everything in between.
 

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